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At my table

Keskustelu osiossa 'Kuvat ja galleriat' , aloittajana sokre, 26 Marraskuu 2009.

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    Now, where's the comments? I usually like your stuff very much, although being a lazy commetator I rarely speak it out. However, here I would have liked even more simple composition - I mean that it felt like there's a bit too much stuff in the image. There's a story, all right, but perhaps even a stronger story without the paper (or brochure, whatever it is) on the table... IMHO, as they say. Oh, almost forgot to mention that the tones nd lighting are great!

    Now I think I owe myself a pint... Velkopopovicky, is it?

    BR,
    Jari
     
  3. sokre

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    Thanks for the comment, Jari. Probably you're right, although If I was going to make it simpler, I would certainly exclude the beer. By the way, it was Krušovice 
     
  4. RDahl

    RDahl Ylläpidon jäsen

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    Nice indeed, light and tones. But what distracts me is that modern beer glass. I think that it does not fit to this photo.
     
  5. mvuori

    mvuori Well-Known Member

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    My two cents:

    I would not leave out any element. There is a general rule that three is the optimum number of elements in a still-life assembly like this. _But_ if there is one element that is less important than the others, it is the eyglasses - how can the beer drinker see the catalog when the glasses are on the table...

    A modern day beer glass is a good thing, as this is sokre's table, not a vision from the past. With a vintage beer glass the photo would be a different photo and the story would be a different story.
     
  6. jaguar

    jaguar Active Member

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    I´d move the eyeglasses on the table, in order to rise it up as a third element in the picture.
     
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    Kreso, as far I am concerned, I am seeing this photo as comment to some well known pictures "from the history of photography" to put it straight. The beer glass is familiar, also the googles ( jan saudek??) the set up is all Kreso, I like it ( a lot!)